Richard
Goodfellow is another of those damned Canadians who are threatening to take
over North American crime fiction. His debut novel, Collector
of Secrets, has elements of the classic Hitchcock tale of an everyman
who finds himself in a bad situation, tries to get out of it, and finds himself
in an infinitely worse place.
A software
consultant and self-described road warrior, Rich wrote the majority of Collector Of Secrets on airplanes and in
small towns throughout Oregon, Texas, Florida, and everywhere in between. After
completion of the first draft, he returned to Japan to lay fresh eyes on the
novel's locations.
I met Rich at
dinner during Bouchercon in Raleigh and was intrigued as he told me how the
book came to be. I could bore you with a retelling, or I could let him
entertain you with it. Hmmmm….
Okay. I’ll let
him do it.
One Bite at a Time: Tell us about Collector of Secrets.
Rich Goodfellow: Thanks OBAAT. I’d love to talk about CoS.
OBAAT: Where did you get this idea, and what made it worth
developing for you? (Notice I didn’t ask “Where do you get your ideas?” I was
careful to ask where you got this
idea.)
RG: This book rolled around in my head since I lived in Japan
in the early 90s, but it gelled years later during the watching of a documentary
on World War II events in the Philippines (Gold
Warrior, America’s Secret Recovery of Yamashita’s Gold – Sterling and Peggy
Seagrave). Once the full concept formed it wasn’t so much a conscious choice
anymore, as much as simply needing to get the book down on paper as fast as it
sprang from my mind.
OBAAT: How long did it take to write Collector of Secrets, start to finish?
RG: The first draft took 15 months, working about 100 hours a
month (while flying around North America as a software consultant), but there
have been many re-writes since then that have taken much longer than the
original draft. And I journeyed back to Japan for a month, to follow the full
course of the book. So, probably four years overall.
OBAAT: Where did Max Travers come from? In what ways is he like,
and unlike, you?
RG: The character of Max draws upon my experiences teaching
English in Japan, but he’s really a composite character of English teachers I
encountered in my travels. I’d like to think he’s most like me in that he has a
strong moral compass to “do the right thing.” He’s most unlike me in that he’s
a good runner. I suck at running.
OBAAT: In what time and place is Collector of Secrets set? How important is the setting to the book
as a whole?
RG: The prologue takes place at the end of World War II, but
the remainder of the book takes place in the year 2007. The timing is important
as I wanted it to be as close to current date as possible, but there were important
elderly characters who had direct ties back to the war and I didn’t want them
to be in their 90s or older.
OBAAT: How did Collector
of Secrets come to be published?
RG: In 2008 I went to New York and pitched the book at
Agentfest (part of the Thrillerfest event). I sent the full manuscript to over
a dozen agents as a result and it was Jennifer Weltz of the Jean V. Naggar
Agency who quickly came back and signed me. At the time, I thought this was the
biggest hurdle, but it took over 4 years of tenacious effort by Jennifer to
find the book a home with Polis Books. I’m pretty sure this has been one of her
more challenging jobs and I have to give her huge kudos for keeping things
upbeat even when I felt like giving up.
OBAAT: What kinds of stories do you like to read? Who are your
favorite authors, in or out of that area?
RG: I love action stories with a historical connection;
something that keeps me on the edge of me seat and from which I might just
learn a thing or two along the way. John Grisham and Dan Brown were strong
early influences. But other authors who don’t fit this mold are Mary Doria
Russell (The Sparrow), Khaled
Hosseini (The Kite Runner) and J.K.
Rowling.
OBAAT: What made you decide to be an author?
RG: I’ve said, in the past, that writing a book was on my
bucket list, and this is true. However, it wasn’t so much a choice as the fact
that I couldn’t get this idea for a story out of my head. Then once I had the
World War II connection, I couldn’t stop the story from flowing onto the
written page.
OBAAT: How do you think your life experiences have prepared you
for writing crime fiction?
RG: I’ve been personally touched by the murder of a friend, but
overall my own life has involved little criminal interaction. While in Japan, I did hang around a
lot of Yakuza (not being smart enough to realize the potential danger), which
did give me some interesting insights into their world.
OBAAT: What do you like best about being a writer?
RG: The freedom to create a realm of reality in my head, and
then have others enjoy that written journey.
OBAAT: Who are your greatest influences? (Not necessarily
writers. Filmmakers, other artists, whoever you think has had a major impact on
your writing.)
RG: I love movies! My tastes range from science fiction and
action adventure through art house, comedy and some animation. I think that
James Cameron is one of the greatest story tellers, as well as Christopher
Nolan, Brad Bird, and J.J Abrams.
OBAAT: Do you outline or fly by the seat of you pants? Do you
even wear pants when you write?
RG: Wow, you mean I have to reveal that sometimes I write
while sitting around in my boxers? But seriously, I outline the heck out of
everything. I have detailed character biographies, and for CoS I used a 50+ column spreadsheet to keep track of everything in
all 83 chapters. It’s a bit nuts, but it’s the only way I could track all of the
moving parts.
OBAAT: Give us an idea of your process. Do you edit as you go?
Throw anything into a first draft knowing the hard work is in the revisions?
Something in between?
RG: I’d say I work somewhere in between. It’s critical to
include things that you’re a bit unsure of and then decide later if you want to
keep them, but I won’t waste time including things I know won’t make it to
print (the writing process is long enough as it is).
OBAAT: Do you listen to music when you write? Do you have a theme
song for this book? What music did you go back to over and over as you wrote
it, or as you write, in general?
RG: Early on, I decided to be Pavlovian in my approach to
writing. So prior to each writing session I close my eyes and listen to Natasha
Bedingfield’s song “Unwritten.” I’ve listened to that song hundreds of times
now (and surprisingly still really enjoy it).Does it work? Well, when I’m in a
mall and it plays over the sound system, I always run to find paper and pen, so
it must work. (Grin)
OBAAT: As a writer, what’s your favorite time management tip?
RG: Plan your time and work the plan. So when I hit roadblocks I still work for the planned time. I
found if I stuck with the effort – even on a really bad day – when I came back
to it later my brain had already figured out what to do, and the edits came
easily. If I aborted early, then the subsequent writing session was always more
difficult.
OBAAT: If you could give a novice writer a single piece of
advice, what would it be?
RG: Never give up writing what you enjoy reading.
OBAAT: Generally speaking the components of a novel are story/plot,
character, setting, narrative, and tone. How would you rank these in order of
their importance in your own writing, and can you add a few sentences to tell
us more about how you approach each and why you rank them as you do?
RG: For sure story/plot and character are the top two. In
crafting the CoS story I tried to
balance just enough character, without over-doing it and slowing down the
thriller/action component that I knew readers would want. In fact (and I hate
to admit this) I graphed the perceived intensity level of each chapter in order
to ensure that there weren’t any significantly long periods of the book that
didn’t provide a decent level of excitement. Setting was easy as there are so
many great places to set scenes in Japan, but I needed my Japanese trip to
cement the final scenes (in Okinawa) as I had never been there before. As far
as narrative is concerned, I really like short chapters that keep the plot
clipping along, as well as stories that run several threads which eventually tie
together in the end. That “aha” moment is great when you realize why the author
has been telling you one story line as it connects with another. For tone I
prefer to keep things on the lighter side, as too much darkness swallows me up
emotionally. In CoS I didn’t want to
shy away from the war atrocities but I also didn’t feel that it contributed to
the story to stare at them for too long a time.
OBAAT: If you could have written any book of the past hundred
years, what would it be, and what is it about that book which you admire most?
RG: Probably The Sparrow
(Mary Doria Russell) as her writing has so many layers. Sometimes I found that
I had to re-read sentences over several times in order to grasp the many
different meanings. The book felt to me like a richly woven tapestry.
OBAAT: Favorite activity when you’re not reading or writing.
RG: It depends on the season. In the summer I love to mountain
bike and hike. In the winter, skiing and snowshoeing. But overall, my favorite
activity is scuba diving, when I’m in warm climates. I once had a seven foot long guitar shark swim along with me in
the Red Sea, off the Egyptian Sinai Peninsula. It was amazing!
OBAAT: What are you working on now?
RG: The sequel to Collector
of Secrets. Max Traver’s journey takes him onward towards redemption.
I kick myself
sometimes because I’m slow to read writers I come to love. People I knew about,
figured I’d like, and still never got around to reading. Daniel Woodrell. James
Crumley. Ken Bruen. A good friend kept after me to watch The Shield since its premiere season. I got around to it the year
after the show went off the air. I rationalize my sloth with reminders of how
much I did read, and how little time there is, relatively speaking. I make
peace with it.
