Regular reader of this blog—both of you—know I am not above stealing an
idea from anyone, especially when the person from whom I am appropriating is
smarter than I am. (Not that this limits my range of targets) Patti Abbott has been providing
backstories of characters from her new book, Shot in Detroit, as a way of giving readers some insights into the
book through them. Writing up backstories for key characters is too much like
work; you should know me better than that by now. The idea of letting the character carry the promotional ball a little
does appeal to me. With that in mind, today marks the first in a series of
excerpts from my new book, A Dangerous
Lesson. Each will feature a character from the book, with a brief into, and
500 – 800 words from the book where that character figures prominently. I hope
you enjoy them. I also hope you buy the book. (Those two hopes compete for
primacy in my Pantheon of Hopes™ on a regular basis.)
Today’s character is Jeanne Archambeault. Her family fled France ahead
of the Nazis and came to America, where she married another refugee who became
wealthy through the stock market. Jeanne has asked detective Nick Forte to look
into her granddaughter’s new suitor, who Jeanne finds less than exemplary.
“I must explain something of my
granddaughter to you. She is my only family left alive. Her mother was an only
child, married to this horrible Bosch.”
“Her father is German?”
“American, but of German blood.
Vandenbusch.” She said the name as though it pained her to hear it but tasted
too bad to keep in her mouth.
“Vandenbusch actually sounds Dutch
to me.”
“Dutch? Perhaps. Not as if there is
such a difference.” Even I realized it would be impolitic to point out that the
surviving residents of Rotterdam might disagree. At least not until I had a
signed contract. “He was a small man. An uncultured man. He could not
distinguish Monet from Picasso.”
Heathen. Even I knew Monet was
French and Picasso was…not French. Italian, maybe. Or Spanish. I nodded like I
understood what a burden Vandenbusch must have been to someone of Jeanne’s
refinement.
“The man was a shopkeeper. He was
the manager – not the owner, mind you – of what you Americans call a hardware
store.” Jeanne made it sound as though marrying a crack whore would make him a
social climber. “He defined bourgeois. My
Chloe was not meant for such a life, to be taken so far from what Henri and I
built for her.”
“Was she happy?”
“She had not time to be happy. This
– Dutch, as you say – gave her a child before the sacrament. They were married
in time to avoid the infamy of a bastard, but Henri and I made them know they
were no longer welcome here.” A pause for tea and a visible stiffening of her
resolve. “Chloe and he were killed in an automobile accident when the child was
but an infant. I have raised her as my own since then. It will be twenty years
in Septembre.”
An idea of why I was there sparked
far enough back in my mind not to disturb the conversation. “Your
granddaughter. Does she have a name?”
Jeanne almost spoke before
remembering to glare at my insolence. “The child’s name is Jeannine.” Jeanne
beat me to my next comment. “It was a bald attempt to win my favor. A boy would
likely have been named Henry.”
Nothing in that for me. I nodded to
concede the point.
Jeanne said, “Jeannine has become
involved with a man.”
“James Smith, fortune-seeking
gigolo, right?”
Jeanne paused until she remembered
she had mentioned Smith’s name herself. “Yes, James Smith. I believe his
interest in Jeannine to be purely financial.”
“What makes you think so?”
“Jeannine is not an attractive
girl.” Looking at Jeanne, I was shocked – shocked!
– to think any female descendent would be unattractive. I suppressed my
amazement. “Also she is not intelligent. Do not misunderstand me. I do not say
she is stupid. Only she does not recognize that men are attracted more to her
inheritance than to her charms.”
All of my grandparents were dead.
Just as well, if this was how they talked about me behind my back. “Love is
unpredictable. Maybe he sees something you don’t.”
“He knows her for only three
months. I have known her all her life. I love her as a grandmother and mother,
as well. I have no illusions.”
“What do you want me to do, Ms.
Archambeault? I won’t run him off for you.”
“Is that why you think you are
here? To be the strong arm? Tres gauche.
I am very capable of getting vermin from my own home.” She coughed liquidly
from deep in her chest and dabbed at her mouth with a handkerchief to catch
what I guessed were pieces of lung. “What I cannot do, what I need you for, is
to tell me if he should be…run off, as you say.”
“Sounds like your mind is pretty
well made up.”
“I am trying to keep my mind open.
I must confess it will not take much to convince me this Smith is unsuitable.
If that is so, I will take whatever action is necessary.”
“That’s not always as easy as it
sounds. Has it occurred to you that trying to force them apart may only pull
them together?”
Jeanne’s eyes focused on me, brows
drawn together. “I am a woman. I will handle the affairs of the heart. You will
find out for me if I must do any handling. You are the detective, no?”
THE MAN IN THE WINDOW by Dana King. Independent
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